Sorry, if it sounds weird, I had to shorten it a lot.
One foot in front of the other. And again. She was shivering. It was too cold. And everywhere was snow.
"Come on, we need to go!" her brother shouted at her, but she ignored him.
Left foot, right foot. Heel needs to touch the toes. One, two, three... Starting again.
It was still snowing. And it was getting dark.
"Come on, Erika," he said again. "We're already late! Mum will be mad."
The snow moved. Wind. She looked at the ground. It was gone. Destroyed. She needed to start again. A perfect circle. It needs to be a perfect circle.
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Hehe, sounds a lot like OCD..
Urrsari
Hehe, sounds a lot like OCD... wait, why am I laughing at that? Anyway, I really like the atmosphere. (In English 'cause it sounds more... cool).
Thank you :)
Karin Schecter
Yeah, it's not very funny. And yes, it is supposed to be OCD. I am glad you liked it :)
Oh, I guessed it right! It's
Urrsari
Oh, I guessed it right! It's the focus on what *needs* to be done rather on the circumstances is what got to me - the seemingly peaceful determination in a snowstorm of expectations.
^v^
Blanca
OCD was the first thing I thought of. I like the somewhat oppressive atmosphere.